JonathanPT's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Succubus Yuuko]

just gonna pretend thats not Harry Potter?

[||CM|| For Kopa-Lopa]

generally the rendering looks great but the eyes look kinda... melty. not sure what the desired effect was.

KikiKreation responds:

That's kinda just my style? QuQ

[Flame Princess Autumn]

adorable. your style is super nice

[Charater Head Turnaround]

thats a nice artstyle

[Miso]

really like the artstyle!

[Harley Quinn The psycho Queen]

looks good for the most part but wtf is going on with her tits? it looks like theyre being squeezed with a rubber band or something.

[Background Compilation #1]

theyre so dope!

[On a Train]

The rendering is great as always and GoGo and Hero look fine but Lemons a bit off.
First off her ribcage is huge and her proportions overall are a bit weird. On top of that, her arm that is grabbing the grip bar is way too long. The angle of the forearm suggests that the shoulder to the elbow is super long and way longer than the forearm. You should also be able to see more of her arm than just her hand and forearm.
I would also suggest making the train seem more crowded to give a sense that he's stuck in this situation but that's just me. figured Id throw it out there
Anyway, sorry if this seems overly critical but these issues really pull away from an otherwise great piece. Hope this helps.

RavenRavenRaven responds:

Thanks for the feedback. If I manage to go back and spend some more time on this image then I'll try to fix up the parts of it that you pointed out.

[Sweets]

her left eye looks like it is being viewed at a much more drastic angle than it should be at. this is my only real issue I have bit it really pulls from the rest of the piece imo everything else looks great

[The Wench]

just discovered this game. are these edits of cards in the game? or are they made up?

RelatedGuy responds:

Fully made up, but the descriptions do follow in-game rules.