JonathanPT's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Background Compilation #1]

theyre so dope!

[On a Train]

The rendering is great as always and GoGo and Hero look fine but Lemons a bit off.
First off her ribcage is huge and her proportions overall are a bit weird. On top of that, her arm that is grabbing the grip bar is way too long. The angle of the forearm suggests that the shoulder to the elbow is super long and way longer than the forearm. You should also be able to see more of her arm than just her hand and forearm.
I would also suggest making the train seem more crowded to give a sense that he's stuck in this situation but that's just me. figured Id throw it out there
Anyway, sorry if this seems overly critical but these issues really pull away from an otherwise great piece. Hope this helps.

RavenRavenRaven responds:

Thanks for the feedback. If I manage to go back and spend some more time on this image then I'll try to fix up the parts of it that you pointed out.

[Sweets]

her left eye looks like it is being viewed at a much more drastic angle than it should be at. this is my only real issue I have bit it really pulls from the rest of the piece imo everything else looks great

[The Wench]

just discovered this game. are these edits of cards in the game? or are they made up?

RelatedGuy responds:

Fully made up, but the descriptions do follow in-game rules.

[Maul]

FUCKIN' DOPE

[Kukitoro stare]

"BANANA COW TIT JUICE"

[Feral Rhino]

WOW! thats super dope

[On my way home.]

good shit. reminds me of Life is Strange a bit

[Champ]

is this a reference to something? saw something similar even with the "we did it boys" thing

oStuffles responds:

Vinny Vinesauce streamed AI Dungeon 2 and got it to write a short porn by mistake.

[Can You Draw ?]

ALL THE TIME BACK IN HIGH SCHOOL.

the second people find out you draw.